Prompt
Discuss a "divide" that exists due to the lack of ICT or other digital technology in a particular country/academic discipline, and propose measures that could be implemented to address the problem.
Main topic area
The digital divide between ex-offenders and the community within our technologically-driven society.
Main problem identified (Where? Who is impacted? What causes the problem?)
Poor assimilation of ex-offenders into our technologically-driven society
Proposed solution (Who has the means of solving the problem? Who is impacted?)
A virtual campus - A web based IT platform that provides education, training and employment opportunities for offenders in correctional facilities.
Proposed thesis (a complex sentence with both an independent and dependent clause)
The concept of a virtual campus, as adapted by the Ministry of Justice, United Kingdom, is proposed to provide education, training and employment opportunities for ex-offenders in Singapore as they face poor assimilation in our technologically- driven society upon release due to them having limited internet access during incarceration.
Hi Sean,
ReplyDeleteWe feel that there isn't a clear stand in your thesis statement and there isn't room for debate as you simply state that you are gonna propose the solution of a virtual campus.
You should also mention who will be responsible for the proposed solution in your solution set.
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